Tattoo by Jennifer Lynn Barnes

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1 ericawassum // Oct 29, 2008 at 8:30 am

http://ellenmeister.blogspot.com/2007/01/tattoo-by-jennifer-lynn-barnes.html

google images.
2 ritajeanstangherlin // Nov 9, 2008 at 6:33 pm

You have made a good trailer, but it has some minor problems:
1. It’s short 12 seconds.
2. You need to site your google images!!
3. Your one text slide about the school dance needs the text centered on the slide.
4. Most of your text slides have TOO MUCH TEXT and it moves so quickly that it takes 4 viewings just to see that you do tell us actor and character names but still cannot read them; you might try a remixing on a “one-click edit” to get a different mix; but my guess is too much text is too much text no matter what the remix gives you.

Your choice of music does not really work back to your video as well as it could. I did not deduct for this element, but would suggest something not so monotonous next time. Your biggest problem: your text slides. You could have met time if you had broken up your text to several text slides and them brought them in that way, interspersed with images. You really needed to do this re: actors and roles played.

Erica Wassum