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Great Connection

December 16th, 2008 · 1 Comment
Essay · Technology · elearning




The most important technological invention worldwide was the invention of the cell phone. Back when telegraphs were invented, one could only send one telegraph message at a time making the cell phone more reliable to use. A cell phone helps friends and family around the world stay connected to each other just by one simple call.  Over the years, the cell phone has progressed and has become better, it is easier to use and it is possible to do just about anything on it.  There are so many reliable sources and connections to the cell phone to connect people to each other.  Finally, the cell phone is just a much faster way of communicating and staying in touch instead of a letter, email, etc.  With the way cell phones have been evolving today there is no doubt that in a few years they will be able to do anything you need them to do.

            All around the world there are people trying to stay connected to family or friends over seas and when they want to talk to each other they have to send a letter that takes days to get to the other person, cell phones can fix that problem.  It’s as simple as picking up the phone and dialing the number.  It is much easier to talk to someone right then and there instead of writing out a letter, putting it in an envelope, sealing the envelope, getting stamps, and finally sending it, which will take a couple days to get it.  On the other hand there is emailing.  But just like a letter email, can take a few days to get read because it depends on if that person is online or on their email account at that time.  Using a cell phone to get in touch with someone is like a quick, one-minute thing.  There is no hassle on taking up too much time or the message not getting through the mail or web.  All in all, cell phones are just faster, easier, and less annoying.

            Did you ever wish that you could check you email or myspace right on your phone?  Now it is possible to do so.  Cell phones have been upgraded so much that everything you need is right there.  Anytime you can get o n the internet on your phone to check your emails, myspace, facebook, etc.  On cell phones you can also take pictures and videos so you will never miss any memories!

            Cell phones are a great accessory.  In the future they are only going to get better.  Soon telephones every where probably won’t get used because cell phones are just more reliable and faster to use.  Cell phones can do anything that is needed to be done.  

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  • 1    ritajeanstangherlin // Jan 18, 2009 at 7:58 pm

    Your title is perfect.
    Your first 3 paragraphs are wonderful.
    P4 has 5 sentences and an etc. which is verboten in essay writing (forbidden) -6
    P5 almost doesn’t exist. Missing 4 sentences and really doesn’t say much in the 4 that do exist. -12

    No EC

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